Captured By Summer. Comments

Summer is captivating...

Wonderful descriptive writing. The cold drink sounded so inviting. From 'bird startled darsts away and summers still again' until the end of the poem, it captured, calmed, subdued and left ME enraptured! 10 Karin Anderson

Don't close your eye's or you'll miss english summer time, I think we had a week so far, so it's better than last year :) forgive my rant at the weather, this reminds me of when i was a youngster holidays was fun... :) 10

You have successfully captured the imagery of summer. Lovely, Fay. Warm regards, Sandra

i agree with yoonoos.. this is good stuff. the language is perfect.. i like you prolly gave me my only lil piece of summer as mine would be spent in a lab.. yay! .lol

Beautiful summer piece Fay...as always written so well by you....Fi 10+++