Friday, December 15, 2006

Capture The Silence! Comments

Rating: 5.0

In silence of lonesome night,
I hold the pillow you lay,
And crave the warmth o' thy body.
In absence of presence being,
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Geoff Warden
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Duncan Wyllie 20 December 2006

Well Geoff, you have really captured an intimate moment here, well done, Love duncan X

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Patricia Gale 16 December 2006

A fine piece of loving romantic words, well done!

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Diane Violet 16 December 2006

This captured silence speaks loudly Sir Geoff...romance engendered from the soul. Very well done! ...................Diane

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 15 December 2006

Sir Geoff of Valentino Status>>>You Romeo, you...A fine Penning here, ladened with sprinklings of th'ol' poetic elisions in th' classic days o' yore...Job well done. ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{F j R}

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Tranquil Ocean 15 December 2006

A complete capitulation to your beloved is called ' Fanaa ' in the sufi terminilogy....which is what you are professing here. Great read. Love...TO

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