Monday, July 18, 2011

Capture The Dream Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why do I have this continuing dream?
Can it be this good? Never worked before!
If it really consumes the heart and the soul
Why is it so easy to slam the door?
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Biff McGuire
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 18 July 2011

Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4. Thanks in advance. Warmest regards Akmal

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Salt lake City, Utah U.S.A
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