Captivity Comments

A great job expressing very intense emotions...Jeff.

Once again a delightful read. Your way of saying things is very appealing to the senses. You speak of philosophical issues but not in philosophical terms; rather, your words & metaphors are very easy to digest and understand. You provide something to think about and also leave readers a chance to think much more sending them on their own paths of thought. Well done.

this 'captivity' gives much disturbing read...the poem has been written well with full expressive feel 10/10

Beautifully written poem if somewhat sad your work is so easy to the eye 10 Chris

A longing for inner freedom, , , , rhyme is good, , welll written