Captive Queen, In The Fires Of Immortality (8) Poem by Captain Cur

Captive Queen, In The Fires Of Immortality (8)

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Fervor has touched me!
What should I dare? How I am lifted! How
As I ascend in blinding faith avow
My love for thee? This joyous truth made clear
By all my breaths uncounted, all thy words revered!

Among these stars the pilots of our fate
Their guidance comes, I pray them not to late,
Here to adore or be adored by thee
In the fires of immortality,
Those fires burn pledged to the divine,
In all their brilliance can but one compare with thine?

Monday, January 27, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: captivity,fires,immortality,knight,love,queen,quest,story
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
"Captive Queen" is a multi-part poetic story written in iambic pentameter. It chronicles the story of a Queen usurped from power and held prisoner, a prisoner of both love and fate. The poem is comprised of letters written to her by her hopeful lover and dutiful Knight who attempts to free his Queen and restore her Kingdom to its former glory.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 27 January 2020

Great work! Looking forward for the next part!

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Captain Cur 27 January 2020

Kostas, you are the best. Hope I shall not disappoint.

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