Saturday, August 30, 2008

Captive Life Comments

Rating: 4.8

I live my life inside a jail,
with walls unseen by all.
Receding steps to bottomless depths,
forever I feel I fall.
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Saint Cynosure
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Antonio Liao 02 September 2008

you have such a deep poem that only....my soul can see...beyond human.... imagination... a very good one...ten for you... thank you

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Dee Daffodil 31 August 2008

I guess we all have walls of some sort...prisons of our own making perhaps... I'm all in favour of happy endings...even if they are only in dreams. Nicely done! Hugs, Dee

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