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Wisps of floating white cloud
In the stark blue sky

Green sprouting seedling
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Deepak Manchanda of Delhi
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Erika Wingo 04 October 2012

Such a beautiful poem, lovely wording.

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I have just been transported to a world of true poetry as the requisites of poetic justice have been found plenty in your remarkable lines sourced from a unique approach. Thanks indeed for sharing Mr Deepakji.

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Deepak Manchanda of Delhi

Deepak Manchanda of Delhi

Ludhiana, Punjab
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