Wednesday, May 30, 2012

Captive Comments

Rating: 5.0

Captive in my constellation
Two little fishes
Orbiting
Again and again
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alireza asgari
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Romeo Della Valle 02 September 2012

Deep and thought provoking! A few powerful words that along with a rich imagery clearly shows that you are talented and have creativity in your works! 10+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! The Mighty One above may Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-New York City

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 02 September 2012

Well, this is totally right my dear friend and country mate, not only the fishes, our souls some how are captivated by our wishes. nice poem with great meaning. so good.

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