Wednesday, December 3, 2008

Captive Comments

Rating: 5.0

She is held captive in her own mind
Slowly but surely becoming blind
Not knowing how her life will end
Now more than ever she needs a friend
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Payyton Egerstaffer
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Matthew Harrison 11 August 2009

I love this one. Flawless Execution in time line and rhyme scheme. Beautiful.

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James Mclain 09 December 2008

Wow you tell some pretty tall well written tales.... :)

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Payyton Egerstaffer

Payyton Egerstaffer

Fort Polk, Louisiana
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