Captivation Comments

Wow Amitava! ! ! This poem of Rahkee is absolutely amazing! You have brilliantly captured your unconditional love for her in every line! It's beautiful, mystical, capturing the mind and heart of my being totally! Love like yours is so perfect, every woman wishes to have the love you have given to Rakhee, your wife. To treasure someone so much, so intensely is captivating - Divine! Your words have been written to the rhythm of your love for her, they just flow from your pen naturally, filled with meaning, passion, desire that you gave to her yourself. What an amazing portrait of your life and love together you have written here, Amitava! ! Absolutely love this poem! You have definitely surpassed all boundaries with this poem, would give you millions of 10's if possible! Thank you for sharing your heart, Amitava, so few men have this wonderful innate gift to love and not be afraid to show it in any way! You my dear, Sur are unique! RoseAnn

WOW' such an eloquent penning on deepest possible love for your mate. It's just amazing. I envy your dedicated love for her. So intensly it's elaborated in an easy flow, fantastic write......10,10 and 10

A stunning promulgation of love...! Those wide eyes with the depth of a lake That captivating smile with a dimple on your cheek- So magnetic and so infiltrating they were, Who totally fantasized and captured my whole being! Beautiful lines! I can imagine the depth of admiration, you have for her!

The captivation by an haunting, mesmerizing and bewitching persona has made the poem itself more than captivating. Enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing.

I felt the Heaven on earth By holding and clasping you I enjoyed the thrill of walking in ‘EDEN’ While we two walked under the moon’s silvery beam In that sandy and solitary bay. Beautiful expressions of love, you have expressed your feelings in beautiful poetic language, thanks for sharing a nice poem,