Captivated Poem by Dawn Rodgers

Captivated



I look into your eyes,
You look into mine,
You captured my heart
Our souls became intertwined

I couldn't breathe
I had to look away
It was as if you could read my mind

Do you really love me?
Your eyes say you do.
Are the eyes the gateway to the soul?
Someone tell me!
I really need to know!
We play this stupid game
neither one of saying
what's really on our mind

you know that I love you

How much longer this time?
Why can't we just be together?
Why are we playing this game?
Can I wait forever?
Can my heart take the pain?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tanya Stanford 30 August 2008

The reader can easily feel your anxiety here. I for one know exactly how you feel. Lovely composition

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Dawn Rodgers

Dawn Rodgers

Castro Valley Ca
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