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Beautiful poem dear poetess......thank ❤

Dear My Soul Efface not your foot prints Take back not fragrance of Treaded flowers. - - - - - - - - - - - - Hey my eventuality Visit my tryst. secretly With fragrance of trust. - - - - - - - - A wonderful poem of love , earthly and unearthly.

Experiencing one for happiness. Thank you

Hey my eventuality Visit my tryst. secretly With fragrance of trust.

beautiful words nivedita

Thank you Nivedita. This poem has a kind of tenderness in it that I realize is in all your poems, a generous playing with words that reminds me surprisingly - sometimes - of e e cummings

The true expression of love is in the air... Beautifully put NIV, do keep writing.

Very lovely! Simple! Straight from the heart! Please visit my page to share your view too.

Capivating words _ lovely poem

My Love keep dusk Dawn dwarf deferred, ...... perfect...10 For our deepest fullness... you shall be fulfilled, when with love an affection filled, you are sure sure to eb destined, as i await your signal to be reached.......

I see what you are going for here...your attempt at alliteration is bold, but, yet, there should be some sense of meaning, somthing tying it all together. For the most part....I don't get it? ? ?

flow and wordplay is beautiful.emotional ink.liked it.

i went looking for your poem 'oxymoron', to which you had invited me, but i didn't find it. forgive me silence and my absence from pm. the first stanza of your write is like the comedy of faded spring - efface not treaded flowers. this is exquisite, not to smother our erors, our mistakes, our follies, but to give them a new life in our living memory. I like it a lot.

I really like this poem, i love the way it is worded as well, i think you are wonderful poet.

WritteN with zest, celebrating the zeitgeist..living the moments and the unfathomable thoughts...linking with the unseen link which is the umbilical chord for the humanity and life...wow is the word for this poem

I don't quite grasp it, but I like overall tone very much. feathery and sensous.

Beautiful! Sweet! Enchanted, I feel I'm standing in a flower field, I run from one to other! Can't make my mind to stay with only one, all lines, all colors I love most! Please Iet me here to stay and wander. Thank you so much dear, what else can I give then 10? !

Now this is a little gem...its beautiful m'am. The style does not wane and wander or meander...it stays gently true to the meaning. Excellent!

Monamie! . You are a Siren of the Ulysses Epic.Luring with your immaculate words.

O My eventuality Captivate me with With auf wiedersehen In zeitgeist allness. Lol this is great! When I'm in love with (people, trees, mountains, air...HIM number one of a top list) like to say goodbye to the visible and hello to the unseen unity pervading all be my eventuality goal. Nice fusion.