Friday, February 16, 2007

Captain Death Comments

Rating: 4.8

His mind has become a violent storm
where thoughts collide like wind driven rain
and major flashes of brilliance are foretold
by the loud thunderous sound of his rage___
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Ted Sheridan
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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 September 2008

My 10 for this beautiful poem.

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Melvina Germain 12 July 2007

Yes we are the ones that suffer, well done Ted.--Melvina--

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Eerily synchronistic.....

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Dee Daffodil 16 February 2007

So nicely written Ted...I love the imagery...I can see him standing on that cliff... Hugs, Dee

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