Monday, July 16, 2012

Captain Cur ..... (Limerick) Comments

Rating: 4.8

There was a ship`s Captain called Cur
A pirate so extraordinaire
He was hell-bent
On the Malevolent
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Valerie Dohren
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Bri Edwards 16 March 2019

i plan to borrow this for my April Showcase of P H poems. any questions, please ask! Thanks. bri :) p.s. i shall include your Poet's Notes.

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bri edwards 28 September 2018

coddle could be Captain Cur's case, ...but i, Cap'n Bri, prefer cuddle ** coddle: 1. treat in an indulgent or overprotective way. **cuddle synonyms: hug, embrace, clasp, hold tight, hold/fold in one's arms, snuggle ...ESPECIALLY is pair was the word. to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Poppa Yao 20 September 2012

Limmericks make me laugh. You did not dissapoint. Extend me your sentiments on my two 'silly limmerick'

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Constance K Yost 20 August 2012

I love poems that bring a smile-this is one of them! Constance Yost

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Terence George Craddock 16 August 2012

Especially enjoyed the turn with the 'oops! ' in the last line

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 13 August 2012

Nice limerick. Keep it up :)

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Juan Olivarez 27 July 2012

I love limericks and this is a great one, still laughing. just love it.

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Unwritten Soul 26 July 2012

I love this funny poem, i bet Captain Cur enjoyed it very much...makes me wanna laugh each time i re read the lines hahahhaha.....the friendliest poem for pirate, as he is a friendly pirate too :) _Unwritten SOul

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Scotty Dogg 23 July 2012

Stay with 'pair'. Cute. Loved it! S.

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King Big Head 20 July 2012

Mm yes a very good limerick one of the best I've read for a while. But don't you think it should have been about me. I'm really hurt. Shame. King.

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 17 July 2012

strong fun! ! ............... :))

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Heather Wilson 17 July 2012

Great Val, that started my day with a chuckle.

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Godfrey Morris 16 July 2012

Hi! Hi! Captain......

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Kasia Fedyk 16 July 2012

I absolutely love it! Salute Captain Cur! ! :)

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HaH! ! ! ! Awesome...I read his tell(no-one) tale 'bout his pirate girl...and your limmerick hits the mark, spot-on, Val! Still can't figure out what was so important in that newspaper the good Captain chose to have on his lap instead of his gal...And bein' I hav' th' utmost respect for the Captain, I will refrain from infering that his priorities may have been a wee bit mis-guided? Perhaps he was checking out the TV listings to see what was on the boob-tube? Wooops...I meant u-tube....really, I did *tongue in cheek* ~FjR~

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Captain Cur 16 July 2012

I am a girl called Sailor very cute and quiet I am small and impish Cur just calls me Pirate. I a-muse my Captain Cur whose verse is kind of bawdy he is both Captain and tyrant and treats me very naughty. Pirate Girl

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Karen Sinclair 16 July 2012

Hahahahahaha! ! great fun...a little bit of wit to start the days reviews cheers valerie....karen

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