An honest mistake it was
Swear to God I meant no harm
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This is indeed so hilarious! She must have read Moby and must have in mind Captain Ahab's harpoon that hunted the whale!
I like this funny write. So witty and humorous. Enjoyed reading it.10+++
I've been thrown overboard and I'm swimming in laughter. I don't know if dolphin would help at this point, perhaps thin like an eel, but describing a woman to any kind fish is fraught with danger.
Beautiful poem with humor nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.
Did you say you are a priest? Where did the wife come from? Setting the background aside, this is a very humorous but tragic poem. Moral lesson of the poem, don't kid around with a whale and stay far from its tail. Nice entertainment but I can also detect a complaint. Someone called me chubby in jest and that costed him his head. :)
I'm eastern orthodox. There is no mandatory celibacy to us as there is to Roman Catholics. I learnt my lesson! I really did! Thank you!
Creative and compelling and composed with a bit of humor.
Thank you Howard, glad you liked it