Capriccio Comments

Hello Daniel Brick, Well my simple very basic soul just soaked this up..............I have not been where this experience of yours took place but reading this (it looked like work) kind of felt like I had. I guess that is what is the point of writing; to bring others where you are and let them come along............Blessings within your work and life Kathy

Daniel, when I started reading this poem I was thinking what am I reading? As I continued I realized that you were taking many different images and putting them together, using bits of conversations here and there that you heard, a very realistic and appropriate approach while walking through the streets of Paris perhaps. You have given us a glimpse of life that we would not necessarily ever see, all of it flowing exponentially with feelings of physical and emotional pain, adding a note of depth to the entire portrait your have painted for us in this poem. A mother comforting her child adds a brief touch of innocence to the entire experience. Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn