Friday, February 1, 2008

Capitalism Out Of Control Comments

Rating: 5.0

Inside the rumors; were the secretive touches
and the corner of the eye glances.
The neighbors had seen them first; on a towel
out by the backyard plastic pool.
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Ted Sheridan
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I wish I had written lines five and six. Hell, I always wish I had written everything you write. t x

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Alison Cassidy 02 February 2008

This one is a heart-stopper. So understated. It's what you don't say that sickens and saddens. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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