Tuesday, August 20, 2013

Canyons Of My Mind Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sands of time
slip through my
finger tips

leaving particles
...
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Heather Burns
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Shahzia Batool 21 August 2013

the first 3 lines captured the attention...a nice composition! ! !

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Poetheart Morgan 20 August 2013

And will always be there Poetess! ! ! ! I think for all of us! ! !

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Dave Walker 20 August 2013

A great poem, we can have a lot in our minds, memories of old and of times gone by, good or bad.

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