Canvass-3(Azure) -Revised- Comments

a touching poem for a leaving good soul left a trace in the mind and the heart of your fellow poets..deeply from the heart..10++++

'will the guilt be washed away with tears? unless you forgive me forever...' yeah a very touching and moving piece well i wish too that some person will forgive me before i get washed away in tears...nice 10++

Shades of industrialization playing with Nature. CP