Monday, August 31, 2015

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Blank canvas, as wide as outstretched arms
Sparkling white, clean, virginal
Spent pounds on two- for one is never enough
They stood adrift
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Della Perry
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Bri Edwards 15 September 2016

Whose masters hands gets a hold of their throat............i think master's or masters' hands. so, did they get dirtied? i should have said wet. you ARE an artist............with poetry. They stood adrift Like two drunken men in the junk room A junk house................nice. reminds me of one you posted a couple (?) of years ago, in which you described a cluttered room. bri :) p.s. i'd say something clever about virgins, but it might not be in good taste. to MyPoemList..............lovely

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