Monday, March 26, 2012

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Rating: 4.8

Before my eyes brilliant colour, perfection
Dancing gracefully in every direction,
The world of trees, the art of nature
Are simple reasons for a painter.
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Hazel Connelly
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Birgitta Abimbola Heikka 10 April 2014

Lovely poem with a nice rhythm

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Daniel Y. 09 April 2014

Magnificent poem! The dance between world and artist is inspiring and beautiful. The individual vibrancy of colors is uncatchable! I enjoyed this poem, please read one of mine.

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John S 08 April 2014

Yes, great subject. I was even thinking something along the lines of this poem's theme last time I took a hike in the George Washington National Forest. I was thinking about how beautiful and intricate nature is. This poem focuses on the vibrant colors, but the thing that I love about nature is the incredibly detailed nature of reality. Even in a single tree, you've got thousands of leaves, each leave with thousands of little details, and thousands of details in the bark of the tree.

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Yogi Sally Ann Slight 08 April 2014

I hope you got to do some painting....thank you for the poem

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Dean Bottomley 08 April 2014

Beautiful sentiments expressed in a great way

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Syed Md.zainul Abedin 08 April 2014

This is a splendid write. Thank you Hazel for sharing the wonderful work.

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Michelle Claus 07 April 2014

I agree with you, Hazel Connelly. I, too, write and paint. Earth is one of my favorite artists. :)

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Elena Plotkin 07 April 2014

Great poem, great rhyme. My favorite line is The world of trees, the art of nature Are simple reasons for a painter.10++

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Babatunde Aremu 07 April 2014

Great write, I like it. keep on writing

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Jayne Davies 07 April 2013

Very good poem! Well done x

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Leslie Philibert 07 April 2013

Nice write, solid and well written..

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Robert Leary 07 April 2012

I like your poem...I find it ineresting...you didn't start writing until 2005...I stopped writing around 1971 and just started writing again in 2007...re-reading Frost and Wilbur and just started Thomas Hardy...10+

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Dave Walker 26 March 2012

A really like it, a great poem. may i invite you to read my new poem called, Fear.

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