Tuesday, August 19, 2008

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you knew i liked him all along,
you're flirting with him, after i told u that i liked him so much
but now you got it all wrong.
he was my first real crush.
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geraldine l. loves you
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Emma Woods 28 August 2008

I think the end two verses of this poem are great and I can see it expresses a lot - When the one you love doesn't love you back we all know how painful it can be and no matter how long it takes your heart does mend itself in time - it has a lovely structure and is a piece of writing most people can relate to :)

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Floyd Minami 19 August 2008

sometimes no matter how much you love someone.. that person cant just love you back the same way, and being with the person who does not love you back is way lonelier than being alone... life must go on best wishes from: floyd minami

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