Wednesday, August 20, 2008

Cant Hold Myself Together Comments

Rating: 5.0

Can u hear the squeals of laughter,
the laugh i laughed when i was a little girl?
The princess i wanted to grow into
The prince i would never find.
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Reshma Ramesh
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Jude Pereira 03 September 2009

Unmatched... Amazing write.. Relates alot...

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Richard Post 16 April 2009

may the laces find freedom and you gentle warmth

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 26 September 2008

Very intense and deep........my 10

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Not a member No 3 19 September 2008

Emotions and words unleashed recounting both good and bad times together with deeper thoughts... love the effervescent style..

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Aijaz Asif 19 September 2008

i have read couple of your poems and i want to say this the way of your writing and expressing feelings are amazingly good i liked this poem secially these lines... 'god you are so beautiful' they say I am gonna love you all the way but darling cant you see you love yourself more than me...a great write...thanks 10+++++++

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Rajaram Ramachandran 13 September 2008

Finally the story ends in a tragedy, but beautifully composed on the whole.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 12 September 2008

its great to reminise - great write- shows your real feelings :)

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and tied my laces so that i could not run. beautiful expression Reshma!

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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