Saturday, August 26, 2006

Cant Edit Love Comments

Rating: 4.5

Its in your heart.
Not like a beer fart.
It stays with you.
Just like a solid glue.
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JOE POEWHIT
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Piere De Saily 09 June 2010

inspiring hope you dont mind if i send it to fadzie! good job man.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 02 December 2009

‘…Your love I can never EDIT. // I LOVE YOU- a CREDIT’ FINEST FINISH...AND ITS EDITIND LOVE LOL! IN LACONIC WAY…10+ MS. NIVEDITA UK.

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Sanya Zahid 10 June 2009

Nice one.................................................................

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A love poem with a 'fart' in the middle...interesting....Ha!

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Beverley Fredborg 03 January 2009

I love the idea - you can't edit love. How totally true. This was brilliant.

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Little Hatila ;) 25 December 2008

'Your love is my heart crest. Cant sell it or loose it' loved it....10 Hataw

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Naidz Ladia 18 December 2008

CANT EDIT LOVE...ill agree on that..YOU REALLY CANT EDIT THE POWER OF HEARTS..no one can edit, , neither u or i..nor she or he unless death interefere, , i like ths, promise..

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Yasmine Torres 18 November 2008

hey well since you commented my poem i thought that i should read one of yours :) I love your work! ! ! ! ! ! u r really good :) Thanks again and Lots of Love Yasmine <3

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Janua Catt Alonzo 11 November 2008

wow! what a nice read

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 October 2008

'Your love I can never EDIT. I LOVE YOU- a CREDIT.' Very nice poem.10+

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Asif Andalib 26 September 2008

It's a nice poem. You are lucky you have got such a loving husband and you are a wise person because you want to cling to him.

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 21 September 2008

YOU WENT TOO MUCH INOT REALISM... A NICE REALISTIC AND UNPRETENTIOUS STYLE OF POETRY... :)

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Shimon Weinroth 08 September 2008

a harsh and gentle outlook, with a realistic commentary of love best wishes Shimon

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Ershad Mazumder 08 September 2008

Love is beyond expression and editing. I enjoyed your expression. Thanks dear poewhit.

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Wendy Bureau 26 August 2008

Wish I had some beer goggles on for this read...LOL

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Keith Foley 23 August 2008

Funny, had to laugh. Ha Ha Ha Ha

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Greenwolfe 1962 14 August 2008

This is one of the more difficult ones to judge. So, I had to go to the title and that was the deciding factor. The writing doesn't relate to the poem so I can't recommend it. On such narrow things are decisions made. GW62

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S... Che 21 May 2008

that was beautiful to read

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Drake Deaton 08 November 2007

Is this for real? .... I mean were you like completely smashed when u wrote this or summat? I'm all for abstract but there's a difference between that and stupidity....a thin line but it's most def there, and you my friend have most def crossed it.

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