Its in your heart.
Not like a beer fart.
It stays with you.
Just like a solid glue.
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‘…Your love I can never EDIT. // I LOVE YOU- a CREDIT’ FINEST FINISH...AND ITS EDITIND LOVE LOL! IN LACONIC WAY…10+ MS. NIVEDITA UK.
Nice one.................................................................
A love poem with a 'fart' in the middle...interesting....Ha!
I love the idea - you can't edit love. How totally true. This was brilliant.
'Your love is my heart crest. Cant sell it or loose it' loved it....10 Hataw
CANT EDIT LOVE...ill agree on that..YOU REALLY CANT EDIT THE POWER OF HEARTS..no one can edit, , neither u or i..nor she or he unless death interefere, , i like ths, promise..
hey well since you commented my poem i thought that i should read one of yours :) I love your work! ! ! ! ! ! u r really good :) Thanks again and Lots of Love Yasmine <3
'Your love I can never EDIT. I LOVE YOU- a CREDIT.' Very nice poem.10+
It's a nice poem. You are lucky you have got such a loving husband and you are a wise person because you want to cling to him.
YOU WENT TOO MUCH INOT REALISM... A NICE REALISTIC AND UNPRETENTIOUS STYLE OF POETRY... :)
a harsh and gentle outlook, with a realistic commentary of love best wishes Shimon
Love is beyond expression and editing. I enjoyed your expression. Thanks dear poewhit.
This is one of the more difficult ones to judge. So, I had to go to the title and that was the deciding factor. The writing doesn't relate to the poem so I can't recommend it. On such narrow things are decisions made. GW62
Is this for real? .... I mean were you like completely smashed when u wrote this or summat? I'm all for abstract but there's a difference between that and stupidity....a thin line but it's most def there, and you my friend have most def crossed it.
inspiring hope you dont mind if i send it to fadzie! good job man.