Sunday, August 20, 2006

Canopy Of Closure Comments

Rating: 5.0

a world must become numb
as society's social chain
advances through our empty
windows
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G. Murdock 20 November 2006

Hey Murdock, this says a bookfull in fewer words. I like the metaphor of thievery from the overall. The thought of society stealing our identity in the line 'we are the stolen' enocourages outrage although we seem to let it happen because it occurs or 'advances through our open ('empty') window. I restate the fact this says alot with few words.

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