Saturday, June 18, 2011

Cannot, Or Can I? Comments

Rating: 4.4

i cannot stop world hunger,
tho i've been one of the hungry.
i cannot heal the brokenhearted,
tho my heart has been broken.
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Captain Cur 11 May 2012

These truths strike at all men. Interested in reading some of your earlier poems before you break 2000. I must also ask; Can I?

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 18 June 2011

Good poem. Rich in imagery and depth. Very well conceived. A perfect 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1.

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