Cannot Deal Comments

I think anyone who has lost a love can relate to the despair you express here Audrey. It's the ''moving past it'' that's the part that makes you stronger. Very powerful writing. Sincerely, Mary

Audrey, I've just read this poem, and Irristable Lust, too. You've put into words and conveyed a feeling of absolute despair, of having reached the utter depths, of being finished. If, as one of my friends has suggested I do, you are writing about something you have never experienced, then this one is nothing short of a masterpiece. But if this is an outpouring of your own misery, Audrey, please seek help. Or write to me. Love, Fran xx