Cannot Be A Lie... Comments

nice well written..................

wow! simply beautifully expressed! loved to read it... thanks for sharing!

The poet though determined to control his feelings, his emotions and feelings have grown for someone and it makes him more sad...though not clear why is it so through the poem. Good write. Emotional tone with a sad note, 'The first time that you 'touched' me a tear fell from my eye, for it was deeper than my skin you touched this can not be a lie.' Beautifully expressed!