Cannonball Practice (I'M Bedazzled) (Rev.) Comments

the petals of her thirsty lips are fading without his life-giving kisses)

I too would like to hang around this piece a little longer. I think I'll read it again, because I can so there! ---10

Given my name I had to read this and it sure didn't disappoint. Thats a ten again then! !

Yes... I'd like to toss a ball or two over your fence.....10nis maybe? ? ? ? xx

Beautiful poem...I really enjoyed reading it. Ten from me! -Michael