Wednesday, August 17, 2011

Cannibal Comments

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She soaks through
Those walls of yours
Disguised as foresight
That were long ago
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Stefanie Fontker
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Pari Dharawat 08 November 2011

Cannibalism nice title for the one who at receiving end. It is like an underdog story with rhyming lines. Rise of the Underdog, I liked it. I read it twice! Keep Writing

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Solomon Szpilmann 26 September 2011

Cannibalistic write.To the extent of the spine-chilling feeling.

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David Beckham 18 August 2011

Quite sharp in feeling. This extends to everyday people who poke at you trying to get a reaction out of you! Wonderfully penned! ! tfs 10/10

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