Canned Comments

There are so many nations who know about being 'canned'. Russians, Poles and Irish to name but a few. There is something universal about this poem and it is brilliantly told. With my Irish roots in mind it even made me smile. Thanks for all your very encouraging comments and will be reading more of your work. Listowel is almost the capital of Ireland as regards writing. Good luck! John

Very good, i like the modern edgey format. I also like the way you dealt with the subject in a humorous way but with more serious undertones.

beautiful one..enjoyed it too