The lost sight of his eyes makes
him look calm and relax
he is here next to me
but not with me
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i like the way everythings simple and awesome! ! i never remember my dreams,
could he have nightmares too? or after a sudden wakening gets stressed too? ...nevermind, whatever it would be here with him, I'll be! ...... whatever it could be i will be with him.... good write and beautiful views presented
a travel in that closed eyes we travelled for a while through this beautiful poerm well done..10++++ The lost sight of his eyes makes him look calm and relax he is here next to me
f he could have dreams really... like us do over and over? can he remember his dreams? .............. dream yet happens to happen by man as sleep reels though his earthly eyes.......quite ingenious flow of unique genre, i do admire...10+++, thanks for sharing
A nice way of peeping through a canine dreams. It is indeed a very unique type of thought that you have well displayed in this poem........10
Dream? Of course he does and probably of his human friend. Nice write.
Visioned questions on the visionless but with great concern.....nice reading... thank you