Wednesday, July 14, 2010

Candyfloss Comments

Rating: 3.9

Whenever we go
to an amusement park or fair,
I’m eagerly on the lookout
for the candyfloss sold there.
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Gita Ashok
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Subbaraman N V 09 May 2015

At the age of 74, my mind traveled to decades earlier and I enjoyed the look and taste of candyfloss which retains its attractions to the young and old even today. Nice poem.

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cotton candy is very delightful to eat especially at a carnival i always like to watch the vendor spin it...Nice poem..delightful lightness..

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Asit Kumar Sanyal 03 September 2014

Very nice poem. Enjoyed it. I used to eat candyfloss in my childhood at the village fair.

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Francie Lynch 03 September 2014

The anticipation is as good as the taste.

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Savita Tyagi 03 September 2014

Lovely poem. Enjoyed it very much. Life's little pleasures are most cherished.

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Khalida Bano Ali 03 September 2014

A beautiful poem, liked it really.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 03 September 2014

Poem took me back to my childhood. Every kid, I believe, enjoys candy-fluff alike. Poem is as sweet as a candy-fluff. I enjoyed it.

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Else Cederborg 04 September 2012

Nice poem! Really beautiful picture of subconscious longings..

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Dr Syed Anwar Yarkhan Jilani 03 September 2012

Simply beautiful. Excellent visit to your childhood years. Love it.

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Prasanna Kumari 03 September 2012

the candyfloss bringing the transience of life and all other good things when finished tastes good even when it is finished...

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Ramesh T A 03 September 2012

Sweet Candyfloss it is to read and feeling eating the candy itself while doing so!

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Amrit Rathi 26 July 2010

A lovely poem with simplicity and innocence of child! Candyfloss is symbolic of nice experiences we have that our senses enjoy and cherish. Thanks for inviting.

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Shona Sengupta 22 July 2010

yummy. even I wish it would last a little longer. nice poem.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 18 July 2010

how it is said is nice. shan marks 10

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Tribhawan Kaul 14 July 2010

A lovely poem about candyfloss. I would also like to seek your comments on my poems. Thanks. Tribhawan Kaul 14-06-2010

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