Candy Verse Comments

Contents and a form are enrapturing me. These are fine writing and expressing in few words, so a lot 'feeling'. It is necessary to be an unusually sensitive man in order to feel the ones form, into the so subtle, and at the same time precise way. Admittedly and am and supporter 5.7,5 - however and reading, that old champions haiku '., used the similar form.Admittedly and am and supporter 5.7,5 - however and read, that old champions haiku '., used the similar form. There is an adopted principle which I favour: keeping the time (teraż niejszy) record of the moment (moment) , the motive for the nature, the Lack of Rhymes and one verse.. and structure being in effect. TANKA and other forms, it is ader matter. Beautiful poems, having the deep pronunciation are rising from the haiku. To sum up, fine writing, it is worthwhile reading the Author. Cause - is there what enrapture.(10v.) Greetings. - Maria Barbara Korynt

Singing rain dancing Mosquito’s birthday ceremony Raining pleasure breeding.... lol nice one Sarkar and i can imagine how it seems when time of sunsets come....they surely are candy verses and you are the master is changing the theme in words....thanks for sharing bro and sorry for the late rep....10+++++++++ rgds asif

hey wonderfully worded and different in look and style. posted 10 love surya

Great and unusual images here Ashraful making it stand out from other work! Excellent! Karin Anderson

I liked your Candy verse...So simple but so interesting..Luv - Brishti Mazumdar

wow, mosquito's celebrating birthday! i don't wanna be there but you've made it quite interesting! a cleaver and imaginative write as always.10: -)

superb flow and magnificent techniques employed here.Khhita khobor bhaijaan/khhita mato reba? Vala asen nani? ....................10++

Superb althrough...words really turned into meaningful poetry...especially 'Mosquito’s birthday ceremony'...very pleasant like rains

The quartet has excellent turns of poetic phrase that are essential into coming into bringing forth poetry rather than mere verse: Mosquito’s birthday ceremony/ Rainy needles towards destination/ Cyber rain/ Chatting baby Just love the poem!

perfect stanzas dear friend... really i enjoyed them...well done.. your style of writing poem is different then all and i like your poetry... sweet ideas with poetic flow and meaningful thoughts...10 +++++

A Wonderful, funny poem. U get 10++++++++

Great poem, sort of uplifting and nice feelgood factor to it, Lynda xx

a wonderful sweet poem..loved it 10+10+++

clever write..but interesting verses..nice word play...

this is a really CUTE verse. Candy is the perfect title. One of the cutest images: 'Ninny perception' And I can't think of anything cuter than 'Chatting baby.'

interesting, really.

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Wonderful poem, I love the way the verses come together, yet they are independent as well! loved it.... J. L.

Great poem, awesome word choicce and it flows seemlesly together.

Qualifier words, in great combination ..........very well written.10