Friday, May 4, 2012

Candy 'N I Comments

Rating: ★4.5

As I walked coyly into a thrilling candy shop
Brimming with children so amazed
that their eyes would fully pop
i carefully observe chocolates
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isam Abdelrahman 30 August 2012

Real and honest self-saying, a jumping-over poetic clogging poem.Greetings

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Marieta Maglas 01 June 2012

nice and very very sweet, thank you for sharing

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Saadat Tahir 18 May 2012

very nice and cenductive..... :) nostalgic and charming nice write :)

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Hans Vr 12 May 2012

Nicely written. I am of to the kitchen. I need some candy urgently :)

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Joseph Anderson 04 May 2012

There's nothing wrong with having a sweet tooth.I enjoyed this light-hearted expose. Keep writing and enjoy that candy

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