Friday, June 29, 2007

Candy My Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

dripping drops of gripping glops
I plant my tongue on candied clops
with swashy swizzles and plentiful nizzles
I pray for her kizzles
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Claude Davis III 06 July 2007

I agree with Reuillard... It definetly was a fun read because of the rhymes. I liked how it started to sound like a kids poem. 10 Claude Davis III

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