Candy Man Comments

This is a nice poem! I was very scared after reading it thinking about how terrified the person might have felt. But I realised the way you used simplewords to make your readers feel the tension in the place.

It is very nice! I like this poem very much.

This poem creates a nightmare not while sleeping but while reading. A coward dies many a death while a brave man dies once. Good imagination.

Tiffany, Excellent description of subject with a nice dash of imagination. I know why you like my writing...your intentions are clearly conveyed. I like your writing for the same reasons... Ray

Candy man candy man here i m, come and get me if u can then u ll realise i m the liquid man and u ll go away...hahahaha take care Tiffany Roger