Candy Coated Dream Comments
Such bitter sweetness falls within a candy coated dream
the place where hope extends beyond the sugar coated scheme
as we dance and dance, around the candy cane sticks
Prancing hand in hand, as we come to one we both lick
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Well this is a really sweet dream! Good flow and rhythm.Good rhyming.You have followed all the rules of poetry by book. It's a wonderful poem. Keep up the good work.
Mmmmmmm......candy cane n chocolate...dreamy creamy and ohhh so yummy.....whats ur secret......beautiful poem...real sweet.....mouthwateringly sweet...........love LeilaXXXXX P.s...the mention of chocolate most definitely gets u 10....
Loved it, so well thought! I must remeber to put some skittles beside my bed, then maybe I can have a candy coated dream...lol Wonderful done Nick!
This is very creative and romantic. Great job Nick! Peace, Aisha
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7/23/2025 9:03:59 AM # 1.0.0
i like ur poem! very sweet! is it a free verse?