Monday, December 29, 2008

Candy At Night (Attempted Humor) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I close my eyes and try to sleep
but in the midst of night I eat...

...the candy in the other room,
...
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Sarah Sisson
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Ron Flowers 14 January 2009

A touch of humor, a touch of truth, I enjoyed reading it. Best wishes Ron

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Seema Aarella 29 December 2008

Hey sarah! Its not humorous....for me its a bitter truth, a chronic illness of temptation taking over my stern resolves....i too fall for chocolates at the sight of it....my increasing body weight is a testimony! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Min Sia 29 December 2008

Truly..it has the humor..but it also has a deeper meaning.. I thought of the New Year's resolution as I read the poem..discipline should be acquainted all the time... Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem..Happy New year to you!

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Sarah Sisson

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