Wednesday, January 23, 2008

Candy Comments

Rating: 3.5

This poem is not really about Candy. It's about temptation. I used the word 'Candy' metaphorically. It's up to the reader to know what this poem is really about.

I went to buy candy this morning
10 am
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Lynn El Amine
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Leah Michele 06 August 2009

i like how it seems like ur talkin bout candy and the flavours... but u can definitely tell its bout something way more addictive

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Mrs King 03 June 2008

I really love your poem. I dont know what your meaning is but to me it spoke to me vividly about my past meth addiction.

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Arabian Heart 23 January 2008

maybe you didn't intend for it to sound this way but it sounds like you arent talking about candy. but still its very expressive it makes one wonder and think.

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Nomi Mas 23 January 2008

sweet

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Lynn El Amine

Lynn El Amine

Antwerp - Belgium
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