Candles On My Cake Comments

This ode to candles is extremely creative. I love how you tell them 'to stay put' and stay with you forever, so the flame is great imagery. The philosophy in the 3rd and 4th stanzas is excellent. 10 love Karin

Very lovely keep it up.

lovely poem and nicely penned, frankly speaking i dont like to see candles on my cake cos its a sad reminder that I am nearing my grave-- lol anjali

The last part of this poem, really makes it great.

Nikunj... this one makes me want to be the birthday... tis a lovely poem of celebration