Thursday, October 16, 2014

Candles Of Paradise Comments

Rating: 5.0

An alley of sordid carrousel lamps
Easel of Champaign neurons
Quiet spun dreams growing
Reach for mystic Dali apples
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Joseph Narusiewicz
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Roseann Shawiak 17 October 2014

Exquisite candlelight illuminating the way to paradise, unfolding a whole new world of quiet spun dreams. Sensual tides carrying it all across a bold bruised sea. Extraordinary detail, all the while keeping a steady even rhythm. Great poem, Joseph! Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

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Joseph Narusiewicz

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