Thursday, September 18, 2008

...~~candles~~... Comments

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i dreamt of candles
shimmering, dainty, romantic
....candles
all aglow lighting my path
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Reshma Ramesh 01 October 2008

great write............

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all aglow lighting my path melting away longingly velvet ivory wax this line gets assimilated in tongue if you read it aloud. Acerbity needs the bedrock of all the cloying sweetness of yesterdays to bloom with an inimitable grandeur all licking hungrily at my clothes wanting to consume me make me one with them a charred cinder very excruciatingly expression

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Sadiqullah Khan 18 September 2008

A warm piece ending with some thing that is 'icy cold'...the motif of candle is brilliantly used here, ,10

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