Tuesday, November 1, 2016
Candlelight In Melodious Air Comments
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...And the flowers bowed with reverence
Before the first rain: grateful for its freshness,
And unfurled their pearlescent, velvet petals,
In a paradisiacal, floral smile of spectacular splendour
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Rajesh Thankappan
01 November 2016
Loved the poem for its rich imagery, sheer grandeur and the treatment of love where it reaches the pinnacle of divinity.
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8/3/2025 2:26:34 AM # 1.0.0
WOW! This poem is wholly convincing and persuasive. It's a combination of wise words and exultant music. If the poem was limited to just one of these, it would still be a worthy poem, but a limited one. But I can only say that because I have your maximal poem in front of me. The poem climaxes with a visionary assertion: WE ARE LIGHT MERGING WITH RHYTHM, AD INFINITUM. LIGHT = Wise Words component; RHYTHM = Exultant Music component. The last stanza can only be described as a mythic realization of your d-r-e-a-m-s!