Tuesday, November 19, 2019

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We tagged him Candle Sticks,
Called him that
When he was six.
Snot oozed down
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Francie Lynch
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Bri Edwards 22 November 2019

2nd stanza gave me a muffled laugh; good enough! ! ! ! well, he MIGHT have been bullied, but i don't seem to see that in the poem. (just name-calling and one less-than-perfect race. true story? ? strange it is that just today i joked with someone that i was going to jump off a bridge! (but i could not find one) to MyPoemList. bri :)

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Francie Lynch

Francie Lynch

Monaghan, Ireland
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