Between you all, always I stayed. 
Being ready to burn everywhere. 
Present when you all prayed. 
Every moment I was there.
                
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Beautiful imagery, using the candle as your spirit, fascinating poem, enjoyed it immensely, Elis! ! So explicit and exacting every verse the candle is flickering in my mind! Beautifully written and enlightening. Adding it to my favorite poem list. Give it a 10! If you don't mind I am going to add you to my poet and friend's list. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

 
                     
                
.. A beautiful write this is.. Candle as a spirit, an intresting combination that you blended so well.