Candle's Love..... Comments

her lips parted gently as if sweet words of love gonna flow pitty I am..she ended my life with the air her lips blowed Rachel Ann Butler

well crafted words and from the heart you have fulfiled the poem......a poem must stimulate a reader......you have done it.......which stimulates me to think of caldle`s love.....next time plz ask her to stay........see my 10 +++

my gosh, , , my commnt s blocked again.....whew.......whatta naughty ph.....bleeeeeee...bleeeeeee

well written simile poem..life is like a lighted candle..give warm to others and serve as a light to others..and simply the concept well narrated...

great, meaningful write... really has a great message in it our life is just like the life of a candle...a burning candle our life relies on Him..to lenghten our life or blow it off and we can serve as light to everybody.... i love this piece....great reminder....10++++

a well composed poem...with unusual yet beautiful images inside...every human life is a burning candle, Sebastine...giving light and warmth burning out and the option to light another candle life...10

a glowing piece, fine all through right till the ending

i love the comparison...the personification...the imagery...10 from me...intimately written!

Great poem, 'Candle's Love.'

good job with this one sebastine..... stay busy with your writing! ! !

this is AMAZING! I love it! ! it is the best thing I have read like this in a long time! ! ! very good job. really a neat piece. the part about her lips is really cool. I ask God, to make me a man atleast few minutes for now so that i can express her, my everlasting love good lines Becca

u are great! ! ! ! no more...! ! !

lovely-- like a candle fleeting love -10 anju

beautiful dude.......................lovely ending....well penned