Spilling fire orange & blue, untiring spreading lights
I sing and dance with brightening flames.
but very few there to see,
Delights for those besides me
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I leave a great lesson with message to world 'Fight till the end' In short time, with my tickling lights I spread happiness forever.............true dictum, nicely speculated. It is the life of a candle to provide lights and spread happiness. Marvellous poem. ....10
'Fight till the end'...... a brilliant message carried by a candle. remarkable narration of a candle's state of mind. so heart touching.beyond rating.
The candle gives the great messages of love to the world.....one of self effacing love! Out of its love for others, it burns itself out! Even when diminishing into non existence, it wages war against darkness and fights till the end to shed light! Through this poem, you have given a message worthy for us humans to emulate!