Candle Melting Down Comments

'Candle melting down', my hand strikes the earth, to a love that we share, finally has given birth. Nice peom. Thanx for sharing!

Good Evening Barry - I've walked away myself, not knowing exactly why, but knowing it was necessary for both of us. 'A candle that has melted down', yes.' See if you like my new poem, 'More' if you get a chance. xxxoooCheryl

Allie pretty much summed it up. So did yuou when you said sometime there is no rhyme nor reason. Is this one from the archives? Hugs, Dee

This piece is filled with honesty and regret and the 'candle melting down' expresses your feelings very well indeed. You're right, you can't excuse by saying 'it just happened' but I believe some relationships just run their course - noone's fault. A question of timing, perhaps. Good luck in the future, Barry. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxx