Sunday, September 1, 2019

Candle Light Comments

Rating: 5.0

Walked into a synagogue and sat among the pews
Life remained askew so many things becomes so
Hard to chew what do I do feeling pain that I never
Knew I would so many things tends to get overlooked
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Laquory Jones
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Sandra Feldman 02 September 2019

One of the best poems I have ever read! Reaches out, intensely felt. In my humble opinion, Mr. Jones, you have reached summits rarely if ever achieved. Please continue writing, all lovers of poetry, with no doubt will make you feel, welcome and admire all you've achieved!

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Sandra Feldman 02 September 2019

Very, very special, uniquely said! Covers tons of sentiments in a most universal and poignant way. Uniquely, fashioned but so lasting and impressive, as I have never before read. Every word, so deeply felt and expressed. Life, then loss. the pain that words can hardly explain, is there, vivid and clear but with a tenderness that reaches out and tares away at the heart " While shooting for the moon in bursting flames"

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